you are very skilled with proportion and detail. this is a very good thing, especially in portraiture.

only thing i can suggest is higher contrast... im getting a bit repetetive, but thats about all i can suggest.

unfortunately again i cant look at the fullview because of the size... perhaps in photoshop - or more specifically your scanner program - perhaps you could adjust the scan resolution/dpi/magnification... its got a lot of names. If no luck there, try[in photoshop] going image>image size...> then reduce your images dimensions so they are about 1000pixels high.

congratz on the proportion, i cant commend it enough or understate its importance.

thanks. i'll remember that next time, cheers

envisage-d- has nailed it right on the head!!! Your proportion is absolutely right on! This is very nice, and easy to look at! I wish I had your natural talent to do portraits, as they are, in my opinion, the most difficult to do! Job well done!!!!

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beautiful drawing... you're really good with facial proportion and making your drawings look very convincing. the left eye is amazing... i love the way you did the light reflection. the eyelashes on the left are my favorite.
while i was inspecting the eyes, i noticed that thhere's not much of a transition to the side of the face next to the right eye; it looks like it's on the same plane as the side of the face when it's really not... it's almost perpendicular (if you could really be perpendicular to the rounded front of the head. it's hard to describe, but what i mean is that there's really no separation from the rounded front of the head and the flat side, which starts right next to the eye socket. well, you did shade the cheek, which is good, but around the hairline, it's back to flat.)
more shading would fix this. i would recommend more contrast in it anyway...
i've never seen rose mcgawan look so damn innocent!

but anyway, you drew a gorgeous girl in this picture!

thank you very much!!

Wow. This is really good. Are you a charmed fan? I noticed that you have Holly done too. One thing that I need to say is that her face is a little too wide in this. I know she does have sort of a wide face, but maybe if the cheekbones were defined a little more or something, or make the chin a little more "pointy". But overall, I have to say good job.

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thanks!!! yeah i am a charmed fan! that drawing is really not very good i don't think i put as much into it as i could have!!

hey I think you should do one of Alyssa Milano w/ her short short hair... That would turn out pretty good. Tell me what you think!

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yeah i could have a go! thanks!